I saw your listing, and here is my opinion.
Totally awesome! I just think you need a few riffs (parts of song that come up once) and you're good to go!
Thanks a lot for the review! I'm currently trying and trying to make some changes and getting the song sound better. It's tough, but I'd very much like to get this done good.
Hope this turns out good!
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